Summary- From the 9 peer reviews I received most of the key criticisms was the overly loud music at the beginning and end as well as adding more transitions and cuts and using more effects. While I was reading them I would go back and play the video and I had to agree with the loud music I plan to lower the volume.         What specific   elements of the film opening did you like?          Was there anything   that left you confused? (be specific)          What suggestions do   you have for changes?              I like that the plot   was very clear          N/A          I suggest that you   shorten the jump-roping and boxing clips, I felt that they were a little too   long. Maybe add one or two other exercises.              I like the music, it   fits well.          no          none              I loved the intensity   of the background music from the get-go. This really demonstrated the main character's   intensity, and the drama of the upcoming fight.          I wasn't conf...